Peer feedback- Pitch

Positive
-I like the choice of colour scheme as it appeals 
to the target audience.
-I like the choice of background
-good detail
-well thought out
-good genre explanation
-In depth target audience
-in depth costume and props
-talked well about the effects of the colours and
imagery on the viewers
-good target audience research
-I like the colour scheme and genre ideas
-nice colour scheme
-a lot of detail including good ideas
-like how you've added a set location
-added peoples hobbies and interests thinking
about your target audience

Negative
- you could have included some examples of bands
which you may include
-include images you may use
-could use images
-could explain using images e.g. outfits
-could talk more about sub-genres
-could show images of what clothing you will use
-pictures of your location more vivid
-need to know what it will actually look like