Contents page Feedback

Positive 
- good main image
-good features bar and colour scheme
-looks professional
-good continuation of your front cover
-looks professional 
-nice layout 
-good layout and use of colours 
-links to rock genre well
-good use of other items i.e. the pin 
-very good colour scheme 
-good fonts chosen
-good use of items like the pin 
- I like the ripped paper effect
- clear writing and choice on contents 
-Plenty of images to Look at 
-professional
-effective 
-it looks professional 
- nice colour scheme
-great graphics used 
-colour scheme used 
-layout is good 
-colour scheme is effective 

Negative
- A bit to read the 'this week'
-add a editor note
-maybe crop image a bit 
-add a note from the editor
-editors note
-add a editors note


I will use this feedback constructively to improve on my contents page. However I may not have enough room for an editors note but I will experiment further to see what looks the best for a final outcome. From the positive feedback I can see I have created a solid brand identity for my magazine and I will try to continue this on to my further work (dps).