Double page spread

I have edited my double page spread using the feedback I received and made it more clear to in the font. I have also changed the colours in my double page spread however they do still match my colour scheme I just changed my pull quote to yellow in order to make it stand out to my target audience. I have added byline and a named photographer to my article so that it looks more professional and sticks to the conventions of a rock magazine so that mine is able to compete with other magazines that may attract my target audience. 

This is my double page spread; I have chosen an image that shows continuity and a brand identity for my magazine it shows the genre of music my magazine will be displaying therefore showing who my magazine may attract and who my primary audience is. For this I had to write an article for the story of the of my band I used for the magazine. Furthermore I decided to change the text and remove the ripped paper as I thought this stood out more dominantly. I also added a clear drop cap as magazines stereotypically do. I think this has really improved my magazines overall look. 

Unfortunately This file became corrupt and I was unable to remove the ruler line in the middle of the page or move my article so it looked more balanced. However I would have made these changes if it were possible.