Preliminary Task- Feedback

This is a scanned image of the feedback sheet for our preliminary task and it shows what people liked and what they think we should change. the feedback essentially says that our image was to blurry and was quite dull. this is constructive because next time I will ensure that i use brighter images and colours so they stand out and ensure that I don't stretch the image as much so it doesn't become blurry or cut off. However they did like the layout and the use of the conventions I used such as the puff but forgot the price in the essential information so next time I will remember to put this in and this will greatly help to improve on the magazine cover.

For when I produce my final music magazine cover I will take these comments into consideration and change was negative but possibly keep the things that people liked such as the layout and style. Although my magazine is for a different genre than the preliminary task I will use the positives and change then accordingly.